How does Williams create a sense of tension and drama for the audience in
this extract? You should analyse language closely and the way it’s crafted to
create effects.
The
creation of tension and drama is a key device which is demonstrated by Stella
and Blanche when they discuss Stanley’s behaviour and the Kowalski’s primal
desires for each other. Shocked from the previous violent episode which
happened in scene three, Blanche unleashes her hidden opinions on Stella’s
husband with cruel and venomous remarks on his traits and conduct. However, she
is unaware of Stanley’s presence and snide intention of taking revenge.
Drama abounds
within Blanche’s first line as the sisters discuss Stella’s marriage, ‘If you
do I’ll laugh in your face.’ Blanche’s spiteful words create an uncomfortable
atmosphere for the audience as know unpleasant words will be exchanged which
may lead to a verbal argument. The line suggests Blanche’s tone is sarcastic as
she mocks Stella for loving Stanley. Blanche is unable to except her sister’s
addiction towards Stanley so she results to belittling and shaming her. ‘…in
your face’ empathises Blanche’s attempt to gain power of the situation, which
creates a distressing atmosphere for the audience.
Tension is
created when Stella admits her desires for Stanley, ‘But there are things that
happen between a man and a woman in the dark – that sort of make everything
else seem – unimportant [pause.]’ The line
‘…in the dark’ holds a sinister, menacing feeling as it shows that Stella’s
primal instincts over powers her judgment which is intense for the audience;
especially in the 1940/50’s. The use of the dashes in this line shows Stella is
hesitant to share her need with her sister, this highlights the constriction of
their views on Stella’s marriage. Also, the pause creates a rigid effect on the
audience as they’re waiting for Blanche’s reply, which they understand to be
shocked. The pause empathises the plays main theme of Desire which creates a
tautness for the plays viewers.
‘- Where
I’m not wanted and where I’m ashamed to be…’ The declarative sentence
highlights that Blanche is an outcast to New Orleans and the new, modern world
Stella and Stanley live in. Drama is established as the mood of the play shifts
to displeasing. The use of the ellipsis adds affect to the tension created from
the awkward conversation between the two sisters.
From the
stage directions, the intensity of the situation increases as the sound of a
train covers Stanley’s entrance into the scene. However, the noise of a train
is uncomfortable and irritant to the ears, which may higher the tension the
audience feels due to the dramatic irony for the situation. ‘He (Stanley)
stands unseen by the women (Stella and Blanche)…’ Stella and Blanche are
unaware of Stanley’s presence which implies there’s a melodramatic effect on
the audience.
While
comparing the difference between Stella’s and Stanley’s upbringing, drama is
constructed as Stella feels irritated towards Blanche’s view which is there
isn’t a gentle side to Stanley. ‘Not one particle, no!’ shows Blanche is unable
to think of anything other than violence and anger to Stanley’s character due
to his horrific act towards his wife. The audience is forced to watch their
discussion as they partly agree with Blanche’s view about Stanley.
A strain is
made between the two sisters when Stella speaks coldly ‘Go on say it all,
Blanche.’ The imperative sentence shows the pressure on the situation as Stella
becomes unimpressed and irritated by Blanche. Stella is encouraging Blanche to
speak her mind so she knows her opinions, however Stella, who usually enjoys
serving and following her sister, stands up to her in an attempt to overpower
Blanche which comes as a shock to the audience while increasing the tension
between the two sisters.
The
exclamatory sentence, ‘He acts like an animal, has an animal’s habits!’ And Blanche’s reference to Stanley as a
‘sub-human’ immediately darken and lower the mood of the atmosphere which
creates tension. This is because in the previous scene Stanley is brutal and
physically violent towards Stella so the audience begin to dislike the
characters attitude and behaviour. However, due to Blanche’s cruel and
merciless opinion on Stanley, in which she considers him to be an ape with a
lack of humanity, we feel sympathy for him. This shocks the audience as Blanche
degrades the character Stanley by referring to him as a ‘brute(s)!’ and creates
drama as she is unaware of his presence behind the door.
‘Stanley
hesitates, licking his lips. Then suddenly he turns stealthily about and
withdraws through the front door…When the train has passed he calls through the
closed front door.’
This line
is key as it creates a huge amount of tension and drama as the audience know
Stanley is angry and feeling insulted from Blanche’s view of his character. The
adverbs ‘stealthily’ and ‘suddenly’ hold tension as Stanley is acting sly by
pretending to not to have heard their conversation. However, ‘…hesitates,
licking his lips.’ Acts as a turning point for Stanley, as he now understands
Blanche’s true thoughts of him and isn’t please. The phrase ‘licking his lips’
is considered to be ominous and menacing as he is determined to take revenge
and destroy Blanche’s power which empathises the drama and tension in this
scene. The character Stanley is no longer prepared to accommodate and act civil
with Blanche due to her insults.